The
Greatest Revenge
When I
awoke, it was abrupt, as though somebody had splashed ice cold water on me. I
stared into the night, and my eyes slowly adjusted. I saw a pale face,
surrounded by a dark cloak. It was a face much like a human’s, but with far more
beauty, and far more terribleness, than a human face could muster.
It reached
out its hand, and a sense of calm washed over me. I reached out, grabbed its
hand, and suddenly was standing on the edge of an abyss. I could feel it staring
into me, into my being, into my very soul. I could feel it ripping me apart
piece by piece, dissecting me so that it could see how I worked. Then, I felt
its satisfaction.
I looked
around me. There were pale figures, all featureless, moving towards the edge of
the abyss. Then, they would attempt to cross. Some would make it, and then
would be either consumed by fire or by light.
However, the
majority would fade into the abyss. They would fall and slowly fade from sight.
That was when the being next to me spoke. “The bad go to the flame, and the
good go to the light. However, the worst go to the abyss.”
I found
myself almost unable to speak, but I finally gathered up the courage. “Who are
the worst?”
“The worst
are the nameless, those who don’t leave a mark on the world, good or bad. The
bad at least influence the world in some way, and often cause a contingency of
good to happen from their actions.
“However,
the nameless accomplish nothing. They leave nothing, no legacy, not a single
thing. You see, if you truly hate somebody, you shouldn’t kill them, burn their
house down, or target their family. That martyrs them. All you need to do is
allow them to fade. Allow them to fade off into the darkness, into the Aether,
out of people’s memories and hearts. That is the greatest revenge anybody can
hope to achieve.
“It is the
greatest revenge for one simple reason. It is the greatest revenge because if
you leave no
mark on the world, your existence was meaningless. It did nothing,
accomplished nothing. You have no legacy to speak of. Is that not a fate worse
than death?”
And then I
understood.
That is so deep.
ReplyDeleteThat is so deep.
ReplyDeleteMeant to add a [2] at the end. :P
DeleteThat's great. But some minor details and editing would've come through and make the story really come to life.
ReplyDeleteBit confusing, could've used a bit more detail. But overall, I really like it
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